Some Advice For Older Writers of Fiction

Every writer has had the experience of talkingwho like to read, who are interested in life and its
with friends or strangers who upon learning thatstories, and who will tell you frankly whether you
he has written a book, respond, "You know, Iare on the right track. I'm not talking about
have a book in me."professionals-agents, editors, publishers. That
If you have a book in you, then get it out. Thecomes later. What you need first is feedback that
writer is the one who writes, who lets his or hersays you have written something that actual
work do the talking. The maxim, "Don't talk aboutreaders want to read.
writing your book, just write it" applies to writersFinally, as an older writer can you get your book
of all ages but especially to us older writers. Wepublished? There's no reason to sugar coat this:
have less time left.getting fiction published is tremendously difficult,
Older writers have less time in terms of yearsand for older writers even more so. Publishers
left, but they have a precious advantage: lifewant to bet on writers who can create a stable
experience.of work, and that gives them an understandable
I have tremendous admiration for youngerbias toward youth. So you'll have to work extra
writers like Jhumpa Lahiri and Nathan Englanderhard, you'll have to knock on every door you can
and Jonathan Foer who seem to know so muchthink of (starting with literary agents, most of
about life in their 20s and 30s, but many of uswhom won't even answer you) to get publishers
don't have that gift. For us it takes the birth ofto look at your book. But that's another job. The
children and their growing up and marrying, thefirst job is to find the story, write your book, and
illnesses and deaths of parents and relatives andmake it as good as you possibly can-before you
friends, the experience of the people we meet inbegin to look for a publisher. I do think that in the
work and play, at home and in travels, inend, quality will find an audience. That doesn't
volunteering, in church or synagogue, to be ablemean it will find it quickly.
to describe life in all its variations.But can older writers get published? Obviously my
These are experiences that older writers have innew book proves that they can--but with a
abundance. Use them to create stories and to fillcaveat. Getting fiction published at any age is
them with real people, people who have struggledincredibly difficult; I can't begin to calculate the
and are struggling with desires and weaknesses,number of unpublished novels (many of which
with successes and failures.deserve that fate) sitting in desk drawers or on
When I say "create stories" I mean that literally.hard drives, having been rejected countless times.
Too often would-be writers, both young and old,But it's even more difficult for older writers. There
say they want to write "about" something-aboutare lots of reasons why publishers should want
their time in the army or the Peace Corps or inyouth. Young writers have energy, young writers
jail or in business or in the classroom orare in touch with all that is fresh and exciting in
backpacking through Asia. But writing aboutthe world, young writers are photogenic--and
something is not the same as telling a story. For amost of all, young writers have the potential to
book of fiction to succeed it needs a story, andwrite lots of books. A novelist who succeeds
the sooner you find the story, the better yourbrilliantly at age 30 (translation: sells many, many
writing will go. A story entails conflict, it involvescopies) and has a dozen other books in his head is
real people struggling to overcome an obstacle,a publisher's dream.
and it ends with either the happiness of a questIn my own case, all I can pray for is that I can
fulfilled, or the tragedy of failure. Once you find ado another three. Or four. Or five.
setting that you're comfortable with and theNo way will I compare myself to him, but in
story you want to tell, it will be that much easierterms of output, I take my inspiration from Philip
to fill it with characters that readers want toRoth, 75 years old and actually getting better and
know about.better, so good, in fact, that it's scary.
How do you know that your book is any good?Two things are certain: I'll get older (I'd rather not
For this you need readers who are brutally honestconsider the alternative right now) and I'll keep at
with you. They might be other writers, friends orit. What is uncertain is what is uncertain for any
relatives, friends of friends, but they are peoplewriter: Will it be any good? Will any publisher care?